This is my instructions
On your blog, write a letter to your best friend or a family member telling them about your trip to the tundra. To earn full points your letter must have a greeting (eg. Dear…) followed by 5 – 6 sentences of information about what your experience.
Kia ora Evangeline,
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely letter that you wrote to your best friend Mia, well done! However, you mentioned in your letter that are lots of things wrong with Tundra but you didn't wrote what are these things. It's very important to always back up your statements with at least on specific key point, for example, "We went there because something is not quite right in Tundra as the temperatures are raising because of the climate change", do you see how I state that something is not right and immediately I wrote what was it.
Keep up with your great work!
Kia kaha,
Patricia