WALT: Structure a recount correctly
Ronald, James and Rachel had to go on a different plane because they couldn’t fit on the plane that there family was on.When they got on the plane it took about 3 minutes until they left the ground and about half an hour until they hit the storm. They thought the storm was just a normal storm but the storm actually opened a portal and they flew inside it. When the plane got inside the portal it time traveled the plane and all the people in it to 5 years later but the people in the plane had no idea. When they landed they were all waiting then someone shouted “What’s happening” then the pilot said “ your flight was booked in march 2013” then Rachel shouted “ yes we know but what does that have to do with keeping us here”, And the pilot said “Today is but today is February 2018” Everyone was shocked but it didn’t change anything so they waited, waited, waited and waited.
They waited for 3 hours until there family got to the place where everyone had to wait. James wife Moriah Was bursting into tears when she got there and as she was crying she looked at James and said “you haven’t aged a day” then she looked at Rachel and whispered “ you look exactly the same“ and lastly she looked at Ronald and said “you look so young how is this possible!!”. The next day they were walking past a cage and a voice inside Rachel head told here to set them free she couldn’t resist because the more she waited the louder the voice got so she opened the cage and there were two dos that were trapped there. She was so confused and this went on for day and days. She couldn’t take it anymore so she went home and they studied What had happened it took 3 months but they found out how to travel back in time and fix everything.
When they found out what to do they had to wait for a storm to happen, It took 3 days but it came around and they saw something I’m the distant so they ran there and saw a portal. They jumped in and they were back at the airport. They were so happy to get there life back. Then they were happy and lived normally.
Task description: Today we had to make a recount about what we did. Mr Goodwin gave us this task so we could prepare for a writing test next week.