On your blog, write a poem that describes your feelings about travelling to Beijing, China.
I heard Beijing is a very beautiful city it has a very rich past
But there is lots of air pollution which makes me gasp
Though the city is vibrant and has lots of tasty food
If the air pollution was gone id have much more things to do
Yes Beijing I can't wait to visit you, but only if you do one thing
Please clean up your air pollution because if you do it would look like spring
I hope you enjoyed this blog post please leave a positive comment on my blog and make sure to include what you think about my poem
Afternoon Evangeline,
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem you have written about the air pollution in China. It is great to see that you've thought carefully about the rhyming words (past/gasp, thing/spring) to make it sound like the poem.
I love how you have ended your poem with a positive note by saying that it would look like Spring without the air pollution. It is pretty sad that they won't be able to see the blue sky if this issue doesn't get dealt with.
What do you think the people in Shanghai could do to slow down the process of air pollution?
Talk soon,
Susie
Hi,
DeleteThanks for the supportive comment. You are a very nice girl and that is amazing.
Have you ever been to Beijing before ?.
Kind Regards
Evangeline