Kids peered over the bushes and they see a house entirely made out of candy, chocolate and sweets. The kids are wearing blue cloth and are wearing a bright blue hats on their heads.The kids are dying to eat the house, but are hesitating too, because they are scared that whoever lives in the house will get furious about not having a roof over his or her head.
It's a lovely day, and not a speck of rain fell and not a sound of wind blew. the sun shines brightly and the delicious chocolate melts, and as it drips down the house the children get closer and closer to the house. They look around and they see that the roof is smothered in whipped cream and topped of with humongous bright red cherries.The walls are lightly covered with chocolate and dollops of pink marshmallows are on either side of the green sticky door. The house is surrounded by white and red candy canes.The window matches the door as they both have blue frosting around the edges.
They realize no one lives in the house so they eat it. They have to run back to there house. They run as fast as they could, only because as they ate the roof a old lady in such a deep sleep snore so loud, and they wanted to laugh but in doing so they woke her up so instead they ran! They made it home in time and they agreed to never go back there again. _________________________________________________________________
Task Description: Mr Goodwin has asked us to participate in a writing task that includes us to write like an year 6. To successfully complete this task we will need to make sure the structure of each paragraphs story's are good and our punctuation is right. We also needed some simple and complex sentences.
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