Peephole Narrative
Once there was 4 girls that are all friends but liked completely different things. One of the girls names is Jane she likes to play netball and cricket. Another friend's name is Eva she likes to play netball and sing. There is also a girl named sivaenah she likes to dance and the last but not least Madi she likes to play rugby and basketball. We all were still friends but we don’t hang out much so Eva decided to have a sleepover and she invited all her friends. All her friends were so excited so they went to her house straight away. When all her friends got there they got ready to play a game outside but they didn’t know what the weather was like so they had to look through the peephole and they saw lots of rusty looking mountains also they saw Ravine which they thought was unique and they thought the marble bench was so cool they loved it but the weather was very bad so they couldn’t do anything outside so they played inside and they all did basketball first and they all loved it. Then they all tried netball and they all liked it because it was lots of fun and can make you really fit. and they all tried what each other liked and they all loved every single thing.
Today I fixed my Writing and my partner was Le-shear we didn't need to do much but I just had to add some more full-stops on my writing.
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