I am a Year 6 learner in room 7 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mr Goodwin.
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Thursday, 20 July 2017
poem for Aotearoa
I wanna explore this place even more I'm so excited I can barely touch the floor I feel kinda afraid But lucky me, I got a spade Life on here would be pretty great Now all I need is a mate .
This is a great poem, Evangeline! I love the way that you have incorporated rhyming words into it and managed to tell a story at the same time. Well done!!
This is a great poem, Evangeline! I love the way that you have incorporated rhyming words into it and managed to tell a story at the same time. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Rachel